Friday, January 13, 2012

The Rise and Demise Of Africa

The year is 666 T.D.A, and the continent of Africa has been taken over by wild jungle cats. Such as, lions, cheetahs and jaguars. The lions, cheetah and jaguars have co-existed for 666 years. But, now they are bickering more then ever the cheetah queen was just clawed in the face by the Jaguar Prince. But the lion king wouldn’t let that go by easily so he fought the Prince. The kingdom is falling to pieces from the inside out.
All the citizens are not appreciating the corruption within their government. So the have called together the monkey elders. They held a meeting with the Queen, Prince, and the King. Each leader brought their toughest soldiers with them to the meeting just in case of any arguing going out of control. The king had the least amount of soldiers he had nine male lions and one female lion. The female Lion was his wife. She was the strongest and toughest lion of the whole pack. But she was very weak compared to the strength of the King.
But thanks to the elders there were no fights among the leaders. There were light arguments about what was going on around them. Later that day the group of rogue hyenas attacked the kingdoms walls. They put several holes through the walls and terrorized the citizens. But, before the military general, who was a howler monkey, could sound the alarm the hyenas were gone.
    When the King learned what had happened, he was furious. He had the Queen and the Prince gather their elite soldiers and the King and the Prince had gone on a hunting spree for any rogue hyenas. The general gathered some of the soldiers who didn't go with the King. Those soldiers patrolled the kingdom. Just in case there was another attack on the walls. Thankfully, there were no other attacks on the kingdom.
    When the King and Prince came back into the kingdom they went immediately went to the queen to check in with her and to see what had happened while they were gone. She said “nothing had happened while you and the Prince were out hunting for those damn hyenas. But, the citizens are so scared that they might come back they have started to put the markets out of order. They have bought all their supplies. Now if listen close enough, you can hear the hammering. They are starting to board their houses up. In the southern boundary That where the last remaining African people live. But the number is decreasing, because of diseases like malaria, salmonella, and the military’s brutality. When they found out about the attack, they started to go haywire and do their jobs extra thoroughly.
    But that very same night, the a good three-fifths of the kingdom was disturbed during the night because of some hard tapping. The general who was in charge of sounding his alarm in case of any threats happening within or out of the kingdom. The King was woken up by the tapping. because his part of the castle was right up against the east side of the kingdom. When he finally rolled out of his bed, he made a great big yawn and stretched. He started roaming within the castle and  kept hearing the tapping. When he got outside he saw the Queen roaming around.
“What are you doing out of bed at this hour?” he asked.
“I heard some hard tapping that was pretty loud.” she said.
“Oh, I heard it too. But it can’t be anything bad since the general hasn't sounded his alarm.” the King said.
“Yeah, I guess your right. But, now I'm kind of curious about what it is.” the Queen said.
“Me too, but I think we should both get back to bed before our spouses get worried or wake up and see that were not there next to them.” King Lion said.
So now they both tried to ignore the tapping and went back to bed.
Well when the sun arose, the King and Queen went to go see what that tapping was that previous night. What they discovered was shocking. They searched all the way from the south side of the kingdom all the way to the north side. But when they arrived at the northern most tip of the kingdom they were astounded by the finding.
Their finding was...there was no northern tip. The Queen had ordered several teams of detectives to figure out what had happened to the tip. After about 7 hours of investigating the local citizens and the ground and all of that stuff, they had come up with an idea of what had happened. They told the King, Queen and the Prince that some foreign animals were drilling into the wall and when they got through thy started tearing it down. But, when the sun started coming up and the kingdom was waking up they started to skedaddle. The team of detectives have a cast of one of the several paw prints they have.
That night. The mysterious tapping was back and it woke up the King again. But, it did not wake up the Queen or the Prince. So when he heard the noise he got up and started running up to the north. When he got there he saw some hyenas. But, they looked like they had a crazy eye. So he hid behind a bush. He sat there for a good 2 hours. Now that the sun is rising the hyenas were running away from the wall. Once the last hyena was gone the king ran back to the castle and waited for the Queen and Prince were awake.
When they woke up the King explained what was going on with the wall. Then, they all went to the detectives to see the cast. Since the cast was dry the detectives showed it the the rulers. They immediately said “It is a Hyena paw print.” Now that they knew what was happening. The leaders put together an official army and had them camp out at the wall. They were to try to persuade the hyenas back to their caves. But, if anything got ugly they were supposed to attack with no mercy.
Well when the hyenas got there they immediately attacked. Then the general made his attack alarm and the army attacked ferociously. At the end of the brawl there was only one hyena left and 10 soldiers left. the soldiers ripped apart the hyena and went home. While the battle was going on the King and the Prince were both back home getting ready for a war. When the soldiers got back and so did the General, they were talking about going to war with the Hyenas.
Once, the decision was made the King, Prince, and General all spoke in front of the whole entire Kingdom telling them what was about to happen with the kingdom and the Hyenas.They all said That any willing citizens of the kingdom are welcome to join the army, and it would be very appreciated if people did join the army. So when the meeting was over the rulers and the General and the elders all came to an agreement that they should start putting together and army as soon as possible. So they took the whole military which was about 10,000 people in it. After a couple of days the King had at least 2,000 people come to him willing to join the army. After 3 months all the newbies were trained and fitted for the army. through out those three months the hyenas and the Kingdom both launched attacks on one another. So it all lead up to a war. On December 12,666 T.D.A. the hyenas and the kingdom both went to the forbidden land. They both went to their respective sides and organized their army.
One of the elders took his gun out and shot into the air. That was signalizing the start of the war. As soon as the the two rival enemies collided together, it seemed like the war lasted a couple minutes tops. But in reality it lasted about eighteen hours. When it was over their were 1,100 soldiers on the kings side and 20 hyenas. But the Hyenas left because they were too scared to continue on in the battle. The first second the Kings Military stop the slaughter on the hyenas they all scurried back into the woods and ran home.
Once the war was completely over the Kingdom was never bothered with the hyenas attacks ever again. Only because they knew the consequences of tampering with the Kingdom. The northern tip was rebuilt but it was rebuilt so it extended the Kingdom's territory another five hundred miles. The Population of the kingdom was higher then it was ever before. So the King, Queen and the Prince had agreed that to take three out of ten babies and put them into the army so just in case they would be secure with having to go to war with the hyenas or Middle east again.

3 comments:

  1. 1. If Global Warning continues animals will take over the world.
    2. Writing the story's concept came very easy to me.
    3. Wrapping up the story and creating an ending for it.
    4. Did the reader(you)like the story? Did it make sense? While reading did the reader(you) ever get bored or tired of reading the story?

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  2. 1. i believe when they hyenas want to come into the kingdom.
    2. The antagonist changes to never bothering them again.
    3. When they couldnt find out where the tapping was coming from.
    4. best quality was the resolution.
    5.
    6. He just needs to re-read his work and fix little things

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  3. I. the conflict was the hyenas attacked the kingdom
    II. The king got stronger
    III. My favorite part of the story is when they find the hole in the wall.
    IV. the conflict was the story's best quality.
    V.the story's theme is to not let people push you around
    VI. the author needs to revise the middle of the story.

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